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Thursday, January 1, 2009

autumnal__by_Spaceache

De Sade beams at you
-delighting at the sound of dead leaves crunching
underneath your taunting feet;
-gulping in deep breaths, wonderment,
when blowing away dandelion down, shrieking
as you scattered them into disrememberment;
-giggling at how a brook bitterly bottles up tears
while it sulks;
and yet, I still stay, yearning
as empty bottles and blank sheets of paper
-clinking to stall being abraded by silence
-flipping at the slightest breeze
so that dust won't bury me under your conciousness
deep
next to crushed leaves,
bald dandelion heads,
and wet choked sniffs
as Masoch applauds.

3 comments:

gentle January 1, 2009 at 4:44 PM  

hi rchrd! thanks for dropping by and taking time to comment. :)

yup, we've the same title but i think our subjects are different. you've a nicely executed concept. i like the imagery of the crushed leaves and paper blowin away.very, very somber. i think my heart died a bit, reading this.

Rchrd January 1, 2009 at 9:24 PM  

wow. nice comment. and you got here fast! that's nice. thanks a lot! i appreciate the feedback.

zee January 12, 2009 at 12:43 AM  

new year, new format! :-D i enjoyed "feeling" your poem. wow.

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